Post by Sage6Paths on Oct 7, 2014 18:09:40 GMT -6
Hey guys. I have working on a fan comic. In a style similar to Injustice. In which there is only a maximum of four panels per page. I thought you guys might like it. First some information about Ultimate Black Panther.
And here is the comic.
"Warlords of Wakanda" Part 1.
Here is the script.
T'Challa was the young prince of Wakanda and the youngest son of King T'Chaka. Rather than allow his older brother M'Baku, the rightful heir to the throne, to engage in the legendary panther trial, T'Challa impatiently and foolishly undertook the trial himself, to prove his worth as a ruler and as a warrior. The trial involved hunting and defeating a black panther in combat. Unfortunately, T'Challa lost the trial and was severely maimed when the large cat tore out his throat. His brother M'Baku brought him back to his father's home so he could recuperate. Though T'Challa underwent seventeen hours of surgery, T'Chaka did not possess the resources to provide T'Challa the necessary medical treatment and he was forced to break Wakandan tradition and request aid from the United States, in particular, the Weapon X Program.
Weapon X saved T'Challa's life, though they could not restore his ability to speak; the scientists of Weapon X used the same processes they once used to turn James Howlett into the Wolverine to enhance T'Challa with retractable, metal claws, and assigned him the codename "The Black Panther". When Weapon X was violently nationalized by S.H.I.E.L.D., T'Challa was shown mercy by, and then taken under the wing of S.H.I.E.L.D. director Nick Fury. When Fury was contacted by T'Chaka, he declared the Black Panther the property of the United States government, believing that T'Chaka was responsible for T'Challa's throat injuries and refusing to return him to his father's custody. Fury did not tell T'Challa about this, and refused to allow him to return home.
Once Fury felt that T'Challa was ready, he asked Captain America to train and mentor him in preparation for making him a member of the Ultimates. As the team's deputy leader, Rogers was uncomfortable with the notion of working with a man that he knew so little about. When he pressed Fury for more information, Fury revealed his own, incorrect theories about the origin of T'Challa's scars, and about T'Challa's history with the Weapon X Program, while also telling him that everything about the "Black Panther" was classified.
Captain America eventually established a communication with T'Challa and learned of the man's desire to return to Wakanda to see his father. Since no one but Cap had ever seen T'Challa's true face, he decided to take his place in the Ultimates, enabling the real Black Panther the chance to return home.
Black Panther was, for a short while, a member of the New Ultimates. He aided the team in stopping an invasion attempt by Loki before he decided that he no longer wanted to be on the team. And left for Los Angeles with Shanna and Kazar. [1]
Weapon X saved T'Challa's life, though they could not restore his ability to speak; the scientists of Weapon X used the same processes they once used to turn James Howlett into the Wolverine to enhance T'Challa with retractable, metal claws, and assigned him the codename "The Black Panther". When Weapon X was violently nationalized by S.H.I.E.L.D., T'Challa was shown mercy by, and then taken under the wing of S.H.I.E.L.D. director Nick Fury. When Fury was contacted by T'Chaka, he declared the Black Panther the property of the United States government, believing that T'Chaka was responsible for T'Challa's throat injuries and refusing to return him to his father's custody. Fury did not tell T'Challa about this, and refused to allow him to return home.
Once Fury felt that T'Challa was ready, he asked Captain America to train and mentor him in preparation for making him a member of the Ultimates. As the team's deputy leader, Rogers was uncomfortable with the notion of working with a man that he knew so little about. When he pressed Fury for more information, Fury revealed his own, incorrect theories about the origin of T'Challa's scars, and about T'Challa's history with the Weapon X Program, while also telling him that everything about the "Black Panther" was classified.
Captain America eventually established a communication with T'Challa and learned of the man's desire to return to Wakanda to see his father. Since no one but Cap had ever seen T'Challa's true face, he decided to take his place in the Ultimates, enabling the real Black Panther the chance to return home.
Black Panther was, for a short while, a member of the New Ultimates. He aided the team in stopping an invasion attempt by Loki before he decided that he no longer wanted to be on the team. And left for Los Angeles with Shanna and Kazar. [1]
And here is the comic.
"Warlords of Wakanda" Part 1.
Here is the script.
Page 1:
1/ Background: Los Angeles Rooftops.
Caption: Los Angeles 2:24 A.M.
Caption: I am darkness.
2/ Black Panther is flying from one rooftop to another.
Caption: I am fear.
3/ He stops at a ledge overlooking a street. We see Black Panther in full view.
Caption: I am the Black Panther.
Page 2.
1/ Down below a woman is walking on a sidewalk. Listening to music.
SFX: Some music.
2/ Three men surround her next to an alley way. She is scared. They are smiling.
Man: Here. Kitty. Kitty. Kitty.
3/ She runs into an alley way.
Girl: AIE!!!
Caption: I can smell the fear.
4/ She runs into the fourth person with a gun.
Man with gun: Going somewhere?
Caption: I can smell the evil.
Page 3
1/ Just one page of the girl being surrounded by these guys.
Guy 1: Well, well, well, what do we have here?
Guy 2: Quite a catch tonight.
Guy 3: I’ll say.
Woman: What do you want? Here take it. It’s all I have. Please don’t hurt me.
Guy 4: If we wanted your money we would have just taken it from you. No. We went fishing tonight and you took the bait. The catch is you, girly.
All: Ha! Ha! Ha!
Page 4
1/ Black Panther jumps down into the alley.
SFX: Loud noise.
Caption: Nature has a certain order.
2/ The guys turn to look at the darkness.
Guy 1: What was that?
Caption: There is the predator and there is the prey.
3/ A fist comes out of the shadow with Adamantium knuckles and punches a guy in the face.
Caption: The predator believes himself to be the champion of his surroundings.
Man: Ugh!
Page 5
1/ Black Panther does a double fly-kick to guys in the face.
Caption: Unaware that he is nothing but the prey for the true predator.
2/ One of the other guys points a gun a Black Panther.
Caption: And the cycle continues.
Guy: What the hell are you?
3/ Behind him we see two tiger’s face growling. On either side.
SFX: Growl.
Caption: Simba
Caption: Scar
Caption: Until there is balance.
Page 6
1/ The guy turns around to shoot at the tigers but the tigers pounce on him and kills him.
Man: No!!!
Caption: Order must be maintained. The order of nature.
Page 7
1/ The tigers rip the flesh from the body.
Caption: Instinct takes its course.
2/ Black Panther picks up the woman from the ground.
Caption: I help her up and motion for her to run.
Caption: Words would calm her in this situation but silence is all I can muster.
Caption: Years ago, in my arrogant and selfish youth, I undertook the Trial of the Panther.
Caption: I was impatient and untrained. It cost me my voice and almost my life.
3/ The girl sees the man being eaten and screams.
SFX: Scream.
Caption: This was her trial.
4/ She runs screaming.
Caption: And in time nature will mold her into something stronger… or weaker.
Page 8
1/ Inside a police car. A cop pulls out his talkie and starts talking into it.
Radio: Unit 13 be advised. Possible 261 on Anderson and Fifth over.
Police: This is Unit 13. Copy that control. On our way. Over.
2/ The cops enter the front of the alley. The woman from before runs out screaming.
Cop: What the hell?
Page 9
1/ Then in front of him he see Black Panther and the cats.
Cop: Jesus Christ!
Page 10
1/ The cop gets out of his car and point a gun.
Cops: Put your hands up where we can see them.
2/ The screaming girl talks to the officer. And they look at her for a moment.
Woman: Officer I need help!
3/ The officer talks to the woman.
Cop: Are you alright Ma’am?
Woman: No there was this man…
3/He looks back and Black Panther and the Tigers are gone.
Cop 1: Son of a *****. Where did they go?
Page 11.
1/ A skyscraper overlooking Los Angeles. Black Panther and the cats are on top of it sitting. He is petting them.
Caption: This place is not Wakanda but it is surely a jungle.
2/ Front face. Black Panther is petting one of the cats. The other is sleeping on his lap. Black Panther takes off his mask.
Caption: I miss my home.
3/ Black Panther’s face without his mask and scars on his throat.
Caption: Wakanda was destroyed when the one known as Magneto unleashed his fury over the Earth many years ago.
Caption: Now all that is left are ruins. My people, decimated, or scattered in the winds. Yet, I persevere.
Page 12
1/ Black Panther senses a presence.
Caption: Then I feel it. A scent in the air.
2/ One of the cats smells it as well.
Caption: Something familiar. Something primal. Simba senses it too.
3/ Black Panther jumps off the building.
Caption: Could it be?
Page 13
1/ Claws come out in midair and touch the concrete walls.
Caption: Fear is an instinct. A useful tool to survive.
2/ Black Panther catches a lamp post.
Caption: Right now all my instincts are telling me to keep away.
Caption: Yet, what makes us different from the animals is our ability to ignore such instincts.
3/ And twirls into an alleyway.
Caption: It is how we survive.
Page 14
1/Shot of the docks.
Caption: The Docks
2/ A gunman watches while people load thing into trucks.
Gunman: Hurry it up. The boss wants us out of here in ten minutes.
Page 15
1/ We see a guard walking on a ramp to the boat.
2/ The guard comes up to a person in shadow.
Shadow: Speak.
Guard: We’ve unloaded all the cargo. They are ready to be transported to the preserve.
3/ The shadow person takes out a cigar and a lighter.
Shadow: Well done, my friend. With this I can finally begin expanding.
Page 16
1/ The shadow person senses something.
Guard: What is it?
Shadow: It seems I’m not the only one with relics of the past.
2/ The shadow stands up.
Shadow: Tell your guards to search the area. Someone is here.
Guard: Yes, sir.
Page 17
1/ Black Panther is watching from a hiding place.
Caption: Armed men. Drug runners? No. I would be able to smell it.
2/ The guards start fanning out after the main guard tells a group of them too.
Caption: Whoever these people are they already know I am here.
3/ Close up of the man guard.
Caption: He seems to be the one giving out the orders. I will start with him.
4/ Black Panther points east. And one of the cats goes there.
Caption: I tell Simba to break the conduit board. Without light these men are unprepared.
Caption: My element of surprise is gone but I can still see in the dark.
Page 18
1/ Simba destroys the circuit board.
Caption: This will only give me a minute before the generators turn on.
2/ Blackness and then gun shots and roars.
Guards: Ah!!!!!!
Caption: A minute is all I need.
3/ The lights go back on and one of the cats is holding the workers hostage.
SFX: Growl
4/ Black Panther has the main guard by his neck.
Guard: Ugh.
Page 19
1/ One of the cats break open a crate.
Caption: Scar breaks open a crate.
Caption: I point to the relic.
2/ Close up of old relics.
Caption: The guard answers with silence.
3/ Close up of the guard.
Guard: What are you?
Page 20
1/ From atop a building we see the shadow guy in a pounce position.
M’Baku: He is darkness.
2/ He jumps.
M’Baku : He is fear.
3/ He lands in the light.
M’Baku: He is the Black Panther.
4/ Black Panther is surprised.
B’Baku: Isn’t that right brother?
Caption: M'Baku.
To Be Continued.
1/ Background: Los Angeles Rooftops.
Caption: Los Angeles 2:24 A.M.
Caption: I am darkness.
2/ Black Panther is flying from one rooftop to another.
Caption: I am fear.
3/ He stops at a ledge overlooking a street. We see Black Panther in full view.
Caption: I am the Black Panther.
Page 2.
1/ Down below a woman is walking on a sidewalk. Listening to music.
SFX: Some music.
2/ Three men surround her next to an alley way. She is scared. They are smiling.
Man: Here. Kitty. Kitty. Kitty.
3/ She runs into an alley way.
Girl: AIE!!!
Caption: I can smell the fear.
4/ She runs into the fourth person with a gun.
Man with gun: Going somewhere?
Caption: I can smell the evil.
Page 3
1/ Just one page of the girl being surrounded by these guys.
Guy 1: Well, well, well, what do we have here?
Guy 2: Quite a catch tonight.
Guy 3: I’ll say.
Woman: What do you want? Here take it. It’s all I have. Please don’t hurt me.
Guy 4: If we wanted your money we would have just taken it from you. No. We went fishing tonight and you took the bait. The catch is you, girly.
All: Ha! Ha! Ha!
Page 4
1/ Black Panther jumps down into the alley.
SFX: Loud noise.
Caption: Nature has a certain order.
2/ The guys turn to look at the darkness.
Guy 1: What was that?
Caption: There is the predator and there is the prey.
3/ A fist comes out of the shadow with Adamantium knuckles and punches a guy in the face.
Caption: The predator believes himself to be the champion of his surroundings.
Man: Ugh!
Page 5
1/ Black Panther does a double fly-kick to guys in the face.
Caption: Unaware that he is nothing but the prey for the true predator.
2/ One of the other guys points a gun a Black Panther.
Caption: And the cycle continues.
Guy: What the hell are you?
3/ Behind him we see two tiger’s face growling. On either side.
SFX: Growl.
Caption: Simba
Caption: Scar
Caption: Until there is balance.
Page 6
1/ The guy turns around to shoot at the tigers but the tigers pounce on him and kills him.
Man: No!!!
Caption: Order must be maintained. The order of nature.
Page 7
1/ The tigers rip the flesh from the body.
Caption: Instinct takes its course.
2/ Black Panther picks up the woman from the ground.
Caption: I help her up and motion for her to run.
Caption: Words would calm her in this situation but silence is all I can muster.
Caption: Years ago, in my arrogant and selfish youth, I undertook the Trial of the Panther.
Caption: I was impatient and untrained. It cost me my voice and almost my life.
3/ The girl sees the man being eaten and screams.
SFX: Scream.
Caption: This was her trial.
4/ She runs screaming.
Caption: And in time nature will mold her into something stronger… or weaker.
Page 8
1/ Inside a police car. A cop pulls out his talkie and starts talking into it.
Radio: Unit 13 be advised. Possible 261 on Anderson and Fifth over.
Police: This is Unit 13. Copy that control. On our way. Over.
2/ The cops enter the front of the alley. The woman from before runs out screaming.
Cop: What the hell?
Page 9
1/ Then in front of him he see Black Panther and the cats.
Cop: Jesus Christ!
Page 10
1/ The cop gets out of his car and point a gun.
Cops: Put your hands up where we can see them.
2/ The screaming girl talks to the officer. And they look at her for a moment.
Woman: Officer I need help!
3/ The officer talks to the woman.
Cop: Are you alright Ma’am?
Woman: No there was this man…
3/He looks back and Black Panther and the Tigers are gone.
Cop 1: Son of a *****. Where did they go?
Page 11.
1/ A skyscraper overlooking Los Angeles. Black Panther and the cats are on top of it sitting. He is petting them.
Caption: This place is not Wakanda but it is surely a jungle.
2/ Front face. Black Panther is petting one of the cats. The other is sleeping on his lap. Black Panther takes off his mask.
Caption: I miss my home.
3/ Black Panther’s face without his mask and scars on his throat.
Caption: Wakanda was destroyed when the one known as Magneto unleashed his fury over the Earth many years ago.
Caption: Now all that is left are ruins. My people, decimated, or scattered in the winds. Yet, I persevere.
Page 12
1/ Black Panther senses a presence.
Caption: Then I feel it. A scent in the air.
2/ One of the cats smells it as well.
Caption: Something familiar. Something primal. Simba senses it too.
3/ Black Panther jumps off the building.
Caption: Could it be?
Page 13
1/ Claws come out in midair and touch the concrete walls.
Caption: Fear is an instinct. A useful tool to survive.
2/ Black Panther catches a lamp post.
Caption: Right now all my instincts are telling me to keep away.
Caption: Yet, what makes us different from the animals is our ability to ignore such instincts.
3/ And twirls into an alleyway.
Caption: It is how we survive.
Page 14
1/Shot of the docks.
Caption: The Docks
2/ A gunman watches while people load thing into trucks.
Gunman: Hurry it up. The boss wants us out of here in ten minutes.
Page 15
1/ We see a guard walking on a ramp to the boat.
2/ The guard comes up to a person in shadow.
Shadow: Speak.
Guard: We’ve unloaded all the cargo. They are ready to be transported to the preserve.
3/ The shadow person takes out a cigar and a lighter.
Shadow: Well done, my friend. With this I can finally begin expanding.
Page 16
1/ The shadow person senses something.
Guard: What is it?
Shadow: It seems I’m not the only one with relics of the past.
2/ The shadow stands up.
Shadow: Tell your guards to search the area. Someone is here.
Guard: Yes, sir.
Page 17
1/ Black Panther is watching from a hiding place.
Caption: Armed men. Drug runners? No. I would be able to smell it.
2/ The guards start fanning out after the main guard tells a group of them too.
Caption: Whoever these people are they already know I am here.
3/ Close up of the man guard.
Caption: He seems to be the one giving out the orders. I will start with him.
4/ Black Panther points east. And one of the cats goes there.
Caption: I tell Simba to break the conduit board. Without light these men are unprepared.
Caption: My element of surprise is gone but I can still see in the dark.
Page 18
1/ Simba destroys the circuit board.
Caption: This will only give me a minute before the generators turn on.
2/ Blackness and then gun shots and roars.
Guards: Ah!!!!!!
Caption: A minute is all I need.
3/ The lights go back on and one of the cats is holding the workers hostage.
SFX: Growl
4/ Black Panther has the main guard by his neck.
Guard: Ugh.
Page 19
1/ One of the cats break open a crate.
Caption: Scar breaks open a crate.
Caption: I point to the relic.
2/ Close up of old relics.
Caption: The guard answers with silence.
3/ Close up of the guard.
Guard: What are you?
Page 20
1/ From atop a building we see the shadow guy in a pounce position.
M’Baku: He is darkness.
2/ He jumps.
M’Baku : He is fear.
3/ He lands in the light.
M’Baku: He is the Black Panther.
4/ Black Panther is surprised.
B’Baku: Isn’t that right brother?
Caption: M'Baku.
To Be Continued.
